pretty woman

2010-09-01 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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When I was teenagers to 25 years old I was blanketed pimples. yesterday, I saw my old pictures by chance. I was shocked that I wasn't pretty ever. I was a contrified girl and my face broke out in pimple. Why was I deluding myself a preety girl? It's just twist memory. most people think that they were good in past. for instance, they think " I was a good boy." "I had fair skin." etc.. but that is one's memory. the memory can change on one's view. Now, I have double-eyelid (as a natural) and refined fashion sence for slim line. so I thought that's what I was. hhhh It's funny. ^^

강사 첨삭

Good morning J!!! Wow, I could not imagine you having a lot of pimples during your younger years. Because for me, your skin especially your face is soft and fair. I told you that before, Wow. I cannot see any evidence of having pimples in your face. What is your secret? ^^ I wish that when I grow older I will be having a very good skin like you do. Have a great day Ms. [Name]!! Lei J   When I was teenagers to 25 years old I was blanketed pimples.>> When I was in my teenager years to 25 years old I had a lot of pimplesyesterday, I saw my old pictures by chance.>>correctI was shocked that I wasn't pretty ever.>>correctI was a countrified girl and my face broke out in pimples.>>correctWhy was I deluding myself a preety girl?>> Why was I deluding myself as s pretty girl?It's just a twist memory.>>correctmost people think that they were good in the past.>>correctfor instance, they think " I was a good boy." "I had fair skin." etc..>>correctbut that is one's memory. the memory can change on one's view.>>correctNow, I have double-eyelid (as a natural) and refined fashion sense for slim line.>>correctso I thought that's what I was. hhhh>>correctIt's funny. ^^ >>correct

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