prevention
학생이 쓴 원문
prevent is the more efficient
the cure is needed to endure besides it is expensive
but while i was sick i looked back my life
강사 첨삭
Thank you Mrs. [Name]!
~Teacher Lucy
prevent is the more efficient
>>Prevention is more efficient.
the cure is needed to endure besides it is expensive
>>The cure is needed to endure the pain. Besides, it is expensive.
but while i was sick i looked back my life
>>While I was sick I looked back of lifestyle.
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