"Prevention is better than Cure". To what extent do you agree?
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Hi [이름]. :)
Good evening :)
Thank you for sharing your opinion on the question that I have sent you.
There is a problem though. I believe that my question was ,
\"Prevention is better than Cure\". Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures.
To what extent do you agree?
You gave me a different example which is not related to the question or to the main topic though I got your whole point
from your answer.
What I am trying to say is that, if you answer essay questions just like I\'ve sent you, do not go away from the main topic.
Always connect your answers to the main topic; give relevant examples. :)
Anyway, I appreciate your effort in answering this essay question.
I will see you in class. :)
Take care :) :)
~~ Teacher Kris
I agree that prevention is better than cure.
>> Correct
If we have a prevention for something, we can manage it easily without embarrassment.
>> If we make preventions from something, we can manage it easily without difficulties.
For example, we met the foreigner on the street and he(or she) asked to me how to go to citiy hall in english.
>> For example, if we meet a foreigner in the street and he/she asks how to go to the city in English.
At that time, we can speak english well, we can teach the direction to arrive.
>> Since we are fluent in English, we can tell him the directions.
But we can\'t speak english, we are very embarrassed firstly.
>> But, if we cannot speak in English well then it is an embarrassment.
And we can\'t teach the direction to arrive.
>> And, we are unable to give him the directions properly and correctly.
That is to say, although something is very easy to resolve, if we don\'t have a prevention for something, we can commit the error and/or embarrass.
>> That is to say that even though we can resolve something easily, we can still commit errors that causes embarrassment.
I think that this will be applied on the whole case such as company life, everyday life and so on.
>> I think that this applies on some certain cases in a certain company or to our everyday lives.
There is a korea proverb \"An ounce of prevention is worth a pound of cure.\"
>> There is a Korean proverb that goes \"An ounce of prevention is worth a pound of cure.\"
I think that prevention is the best solution for all trouble.
>> I think that prevention is the best solutions for all troubles.
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