Prevention is better than cure. What does this phrase mean, and do you agree?
학생이 쓴 원문
I believe this phrase indicates that prevent diseases from happening would be better than curing them afterward. I agree with this statement. The illness would influence and deteriorate the im[이름]e system somehow, and COVID is a suitable example to explain this. Some patients experience the aftereffect after suffering from COVID-19. This rule applies evenly to asymptomatic or severely ill patients. I read an article last week that a patient who suffered from a South Africa strain of COVID is suffering from olfactory hallucination, so he keeps smell something burning. Many doctors and scientists presume the symptom is from the ravaged im[이름]e system, and they are still experimenting to find the cure. In this way, I believe preventing disease is better than curing it afterward.
강사 첨삭
I believe this phrase indicates that prevent diseases from happening would be better than curing them afterward.
>>> I believe this phrase indicates that preventing diseases from happening would be better than curing them afterward.
I agree with this statement.
>>> correct
The illness would influence and deteriorate the im[이름]e system somehow, and COVID is a suitable example to explain this.
>>> correct
Some patients experience the aftereffect after suffering from COVID-19.
>>> correct
This rule applies evenly to asymptomatic or severely ill patients.
>>> correct
I read an article last week that a patient who suffered from a South Africa strain of COVID is suffering from olfactory hallucination, so he keeps smell something burning.
>>> correct
Many doctors and scientists presume the symptom is from the ravaged im[이름]e system, and they are still experimenting to find the cure.
>>> correct
In this way, I believe preventing disease is better than curing it afterward.
>>> In this way, I believe preventing the disease is better than curing it afterwards.
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