Prevention is far better than cure
학생이 쓴 원문
Have you ever heard \"Prevention is better than cure?\" Perhaps you have seen this phrase at the hospital or pharmacy. I\'d like to explain why prevention is more important than cure.
First, it takes far less money and time for prevention than cure. Washing your hand and wearing a mask are not that difficult to do. However, if you need cure, you have to invest a lot of money and time. In a word, prevention is better in view of efficiency.
Next, you can\'t ignore aftereffect. Even though you take the best cure, you might have the aftereffect. For example, in case of Novel Coronavirus, your lung might become hard(hard to breathe) after you overcome that disease completely.
Lastly, prevention can protect other people. If you have a contagious disease, you may infect others before you get proper cure. However, prevention doesn\'t make you harm others. That\'s why people emphasize prevention when contagious disease(like Coronavirus) spreads widely.
강사 첨삭
Good point!
Prevention costs lesser than cure.
This is why it\'s better to continually be healthy.
Aja aja!
~Teacher Eve.
Have you ever heard \"Prevention is better than cure?\"
>> Have you ever heard of \"Prevention is better than cure\"?
Perhaps you have seen this phrase at the hospital or pharmacy.
>> Perhaps you have seen this phrase in the hospital or pharmacy.
I\'d like to explain why prevention is more important than cure.
>> Correct!
First, it takes far less money and time for prevention than cure.
>> Correct!
Washing your hand and wearing a mask are not that difficult to do.
>> Washing your hands and wearing a mask are not that difficult to do.
However, if you need cure, you have to invest a lot of money and time.
>> Correct!
In a word, prevention is better in view of efficiency.
>> Correct!
Next, you can\'t ignore aftereffect.
>> Next, you can\'t ignore the after-effects.
Even though you take the best cure, you might have the aftereffect.
>> Even though you take the best cure, you might have some after-effects.
For example, in case of Novel Coronavirus, your lung might become hard(hard to breathe) after you overcome that disease completely.
>> For example, in the case of the Novel Coronavirus, it might become hard for your lungs to breathe after completely overcoming that disease.
Lastly, prevention can protect other people.
>> Correct!
If you have a contagious disease, you may infect others before you get proper cure.
>> If you have a contagious disease, you may infect others before you get a proper cure.
However, prevention doesn\'t make you harm others.
>> Correct!
That\'s why people emphasize prevention when contagious disease(like Coronavirus) spreads widely.
>> That\'s why people are emphasizing prevention when a contagious disease, like Coronavirus, spreads widely.
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