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1. When did you get your first cell phone? i got my first cell phone in 14years old. but i had forgotten my cellphone in only 2 months.then my father didn't buy me another one till i was 20 years old. 2. Do you know anyone who doesn’t own a cell phone? no. i had seen who has 2 cell phone but i hadn't seen before who has no cell phone. 3. How much do you think is appropriate for a teenager’s monthly cell phone bill? I think \35,000 is appropriate for them. i never consume over \50,000 in my life 4. For what purposes do you think a teenager needs a cell phone? for their safety and learning program. that is only reason to have cell phone for teenager's. I spend almost of my life without cell phone. and that is really good experinece. I cannot be bothered by someone else when i studied or had my own time. but since i had my cell phone. i cannot concentrate all the things. and i spend too much time with cellphotoo much time with cellphone.cellphone defenitely makes me a poor.

Dear [Name],   Happy Monday! ^^   It\'s really good that you are having a preview of our class. Thank you very much for making your composition. However, check your grammar and way of writing. Remember that you need to capitalize the first letter of the first word of a sentence. In addition, be careful of your spacing.   Anyway, you made a good composition so VERY GOOD! ^^   That\'s all for now! ^^, Happy reading! ^^. See you in class tomorrow! ^^   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     1. When did you get your first cell phone? i got my first cell phone in 14years old. >> I got my first cell phone when I was 14 years old. 1. Don\'t forget to make i to I. (Make the first letter of the first word of  a sentence big.) 2. IN 14 YEARS OLD should be WHEN I WAS 14 YEARS OLD.) 3. There should be a space between a number and a word. For example, 14 YEARS OLD. but i had forgotten my cellphone in only 2 months. >> But, I had forgotten my cell phone in only 2 months. >> OR: However, I had forgotten my cell phone in just 2 months. >> OR: But, I lost my cell phone after 2 months of using it. 4. There should be a comma after BUT. 5. \"I\" alone should always be capitalized. then my father didn\'t buy me another one till i was 20 years old. >> Then, my father didn\'t buy me another one till I was 20 years old. 6. There should be a comma after THEN.2. Do you know anyone who doesn’t own a cell phone? no. i had seen who has 2 cell phone but i hadn\'t seen before who has no cell phone. >> No, I have seen people who have 2 cell phones, but I didn\'t see anyone before who had no cell phone. >> OR: No, I see people who have 2 cell phones, but I don\'t see anyone who doesn\'t have a cell phone. 7. N in NO should be a big letter. 8. The DOT after NO should be a COMMA. 9. There should be a comma after phone or before but. 10. THE \"I\"s after no and but should be big letters. 11. REMEMBER: one cell phone ... two cell phones 3. How much do you think is appropriate for a teenager’s monthly cell phone bill? I think 35,000 is appropriate for them. >> I think 35,000 won is appropriate for a teenager\'s monthly cell phone bill. 12. There should be WON or DOLLARS after 35,000. 13. FOR THEM means 35,000 won to all teenagers not each teenager. i never consume over 50,000 in my life >> I never consumed over 50,000 won in  my life. >> OR: I haven\'t spent over 50,000 won in my life. 14. i should always be I. 15. There should be WON after 50,000.4. For what purposes do you think a teenager needs a cell phone? for their safety and learning program. >> A teenager needs a cell phone for his or her safety and learning programs. 16. Make complete sentences. that is only reason to have cell phone for teenager\'s.>> Those are the only reasons why a teenager needs a cell phone. 17. You gave two purposes why teenagers need cell phones, so THAT should be THOSE, IS should be ARE, and REASON should be REASONS. I spend almost of my life without cell phone. >> I spend almost all of my life without a cell phone. >> OR: I spend most all of my life without a cell phone.  and that is really good experinece.>> And, that is really a good experience. I cannot be bothered by someone else when i studied or had my own time.>> I cannot be bothered by anyone when I study or have my own time. but since i had my cell phone. i cannot concentrate all the things. >> But, since I had my cell phone, I cannot concentrate on anything. and i spend too much time with cellphotoo much time with cellphone. >> And, I spend too much money and time for my cell phone. cellphone defenitely makes me a poor. >> My cell phone definitely makes me poor.