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Today, I had a meeting. But, I couldn\'t focuse my tasks because I have an interview. My personality trait is only concentrateing an important event. So, I couldn’t think of the other things. But, my husband have opposite personality. He rarely doesn\'t get stress even he faced the important events. He sometimes couldn’t understand my personality because we have an opposite personality. For example, today, my husband wanted to play soccer with me. But, I didn’t want to play soccer because I wanted to study E. He went to outside. So, I am in the house alone.
I will try it according your advices.
4 years ago, when I was searching my job. My husband really helped me to prepare the interview. He was already a worker at that time. But, now, he doesn’t really care my interview compared to past help. I understand some of part. He looks like thinking that because I already have relevant experiences, It will not difficult to find the other job.r job
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Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for sending and have a great day!
~T. Roanne ^_^
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Today, I had a meeting. But, I couldn\'t focuse my tasks because I have an interview.
>> Today, I had a meeting. But, I couldn\'t focus on my other tasks because I have an interview.
My personality trait is only concentrateing an important event.
>> My personality trait is only concentrating on an important event.
So, I couldn’t think of the other things.
>> Correct!
But, my husband have opposite personality.
>> But, my husband has the opposite personality.
He rarely doesn\'t get stress even he faced the important events.
>> He rarely doesn\'t get stressed even when he faced some important events.
He sometimes couldn’t understand my personality because we have an opposite personality.
>> Correct!
For example, today, my husband wanted to play soccer with me.
>> Correct!
But, I didn’t want to play soccer because I wanted to study E.
>> But, I didn’t want to play soccer because I wanted to study English.
He went to outside.
>> Correct!
So, I am in the house alone.
>> Correct!
I will try it according your advices.
I will try it according your advices.
>> I will try it according to your advices.
4 years ago, when I was searching my job.
4 years ago, when I was searching my job.
>> 4 years ago, when I was searching for a job.
My husband really helped me to prepare the interview.
>> Correct!
He was already a worker at that time.
>> Correct!
But, now, he doesn’t really care my interview compared to past help.
>> But, now, he doesn’t really care about my interview compared to past help.
I understand some of part.
>> I understand some of it. OR I understand some part of.
He looks like thinking that because I already have relevant experiences, It will not difficult to find the other job.r job
>> He looks like thinking that way because I already have relevant experiences, It will not difficult to find another job.
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