Private school
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello! Ms. [Name]
l submit my homework as following
1. I know someone who was working with me previous company.
2. He went to Paraguay which is located the central and south america.
3. I want to improve my english skill by your teaching.
Thank you Sir
강사 첨삭
Hey there, [이름]!^^
How are you doing today?
I hope that you are just having a great time over there.
Thank you for taking time to do your homework. Keep up!^^
~ T. Lorna^^
>> I submit my homework as follows.
1. I know someone who was working with me previous company.
>> I know someone who was working with me at my previous company.
2. He went to Paraguay which is located the central and south america.
>> He went to Paraguay which is located at the central part of South America.
3. I want to improve my english skill by your teaching.
>> I want to improve my English skills through your teachings.
Thank you Sir
>> Thank you, Ma\'am. ( If you are thanking me^^.)
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