Prize, Part 2, #2
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Next, I remembered I was so inspired by the fact that I received credits for my research results. For the most part, the award made me happy and proud because it was an acknowledgment of job performance and justification for the suffering, the self-doubt, and the hard work that I went through. Furthermore, it gave me validation and a boost of confidence and self-esteem. However, I was also overwhelmed and anxious as I worried people\'s expectations would become higher. They expected me to work harder or provide better results. I guess I felt mixed emotions at that time.
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Here\'s your 3rd composition. See you in class, [이름]!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Next, I remembered I was so inspired by the fact that I received credits for my research results.
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For the most part, the award made me happy and proud because it was an acknowledgment of job performance and justification for the suffering, the self-doubt, and the hard work that I went through.
>> For the most part, the award made me happy and proud because it was an acknowledgment of my job performance and justification for the suffering, the self-doubt, and the hard work that I went through.
Furthermore, it gave me validation and a boost of confidence and self-esteem. However, I was also overwhelmed and anxious as I worried people\'s expectations would become higher. They expected me to work harder or provide better results. I guess I felt mixed emotions at that time.
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