Probably....
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Probably... Addicted person may be the one who suffers most.
then, his family is followed. Even they are innocent from gambling, they have to get a pain of gambling.
In worse case, they may pay back to private bank(non-banking sector).
Like a drug, gambling have a power to make somone concentrate on it.
I heard a gambling place like MACAO and LAS VEGAS haven't enough parking lot.
because many cars in the parking lot are mortgaged by money withdraw service company.
Casino has two contradictory aspects.
Gambling place make city or country prosper, and.. might be the chance for someone.
However on the other hand, It is blamed for making people a slave of the money of addiction.
Most of gambling addicter lost How to think reasonally, but they only think just little probable of outcome.
They can't get out of the swamp of gambling
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Good afternoon [이름]!
It is really difficult to be addicted to it.
They might lost their family, house and wealth.
Have you ever been to a Casino?
What do you think is the lifestyle of gamblers?
Please share more of your ideas about this in class.
Teacher Nina
Probably... Addicted person may be the one who suffers most.
>> Correct then, his family is followed.
>> Then, his family follows.
Even they are innocent from gambling, they have to get a pain of gambling.
>> Even they are innocent about gambing, they have to experience the consequences of it. In worse case, they may pay back to private bank(non-banking sector).
>> In worse case, they might pay back to private banks. Like a drug, gambling have a power to make somone concentrate on it.
>> Like a drug, gambling has a power to make someone concentrate on it. I heard a gambling place like MACAO and LAS VEGAS haven\'t enough parking lot.
>> I heard about gambling places like Macau and Las Vegas, they don\'t have enough parking space there. because many cars in the parking lot are mortgaged by money withdraw service company.
>> Because many cars at the parking lot are mortgaged.
>> OR: Because many caras at the parking lot are mortgaged because of withdrawing money. Casino has two contradictory aspects.
>> Correct Gambling place make city or country prosper, and.. might be the chance for someone.
>> Gambling places make the city or country prosper and it might be a chance for someone to be rich. However on the other hand, It is blamed for making people a slave of the money of addiction.
>> However, on the other hand, it is blamed for making people a slave of money addiction. Most of gambling addicter lost How to think reasonally, but they only think just little probable of outcome.
>> Did you mean: Most gamblers lost how to think reasonably, they only think about little probable outcome of it.
>> OR: Most people who are addicted to it lost how to be practical and they only think about the outcome of it. They can\'t get out of the swamp of gambling
>> Correct
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