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Hi [이름]!
Good evening:)
Thank you for sharing your short essay. :)
You really are a baseball fanatic.
Maybe one day, you will be a baseball player.
You will be famous; You will have a lot of followers; and
a lot of people will idolize you.
Don\'t you like that?
I will see you in our class. Have a great night! ^^
~~ Teacher Kris
10 teams had practice games until last Sunday.
>> 10 teams had their game practice until last Saturday.
And I am a little satsified with my team rank.
>> Correct
My favorite team KIA ranking is 5.
>> My favorite team, KIA, ranked 5.
Samsung and Nexen built a new baseball stadium.
>> Correct
And Park He Min score first homerun in the new baseball stadium.
>> Park He Min scored the first homerun in the new baseball stadium.
And yesterday I heard KIA bought Im [Name] yong.
>> Correct
Im [Name] young is key player.
>> Im [Name] Young is a key player.
But he went on the gamble last year.
>> But he went gambling last year.
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