problem of delivery schedule
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Great Monday to you Mr. [이름]!
Thanks for today\'s class.
I hope that your problem will not happen again in the future.
Anyway,
I wish you all good things this coming new year.
I hope that you\'ll have a great holiday!
Tell me more about your New Year on Thursday.
May you have a prosperous New Year!
Have fun!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
I had a problem for my business at last week.
>> I had a problem on my business last week.
It\'s to be advanced more for delivery of ocean freight.
>> It\'s to be more advanced in the delivery of ocean freight.
The supplier in USA did not keep appointment of original schedule with me.
>> The supplier in USA did not keep the appointment of the original schedule with me.
They said that is due to holidays of the end of year.
>> They said that the due is during the holidays at the end of the year.
The delivery will be arrived more late about 2 weeks.
>> The delivery will arrive 2 weeks later.
My customer in Korea have to accept it.
>> My customer in Korea has to accept it.
I have nothing to do.
>> correct!
I hope to be not happened this case in the future.
>> I hope that this case will not happen in the future.
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