problem of delivery schedule

2013-12-30 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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I had a problem for my business at last week. It's to be advanced more for delivery of ocean freight. The supplier in USA did not keep appointment of original schedule with me. They said that is due to holidays of the end of year. The delivery will be arrived more late about 2 weeks. My customer in Korea have to accept it. I have nothing to do. I hope to be not happened this case in the future.

강사 첨삭

Great Monday to you Mr. [이름]! 

Thanks for today\'s class. 

I hope that your problem will not happen again in the future. 


Anyway, I wish you all good things this coming new year. 

I hope that you\'ll have a great holiday! 

Tell me more about your New Year on Thursday. 

May you have a prosperous New Year! 
Have fun! 


Always, 
Kathrine ^^


I had a problem for my business at last week.

>>  I had a problem on my business last week. 

It\'s to be advanced more for delivery of ocean freight.

>>  It\'s to be more advanced in the delivery of ocean freight. 

The supplier in USA did not keep appointment of original schedule with me.

>>  The supplier in USA did not keep the appointment of the original schedule with me. 

They said that is due to holidays of the end of year.

>>  They said that the due is during the holidays at the end of the year. 

The delivery will be arrived more late about 2 weeks.

>>  The delivery will arrive 2 weeks later. 

My customer in Korea have to accept it.

>>  My customer in Korea has to accept it. 

I have nothing to do.

>>  correct! 

 I hope to be not happened this case in the future. 

>>   I hope that this case will not happen in the future. 

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