Problem of young people.
학생이 쓴 원문
Young people have many problems.
when they are graduate the high-school, they worry about that they aer going to high-class university. but, High-class universities have a limited in total admission people. so, we gonna do study extremely.
but this is not end of worry.
after graduate the university, they will worry about get a job.
but Good job which is a high rewards are limited to get in.
after get a job, they will worry about I should get marry with someone. but, I
don't know marry who. It's difficult problem to me. but this is not end of young
peoples worry.
also, you who is read this sentence are also worry about this problems.
Humans life is not easy.
강사 첨삭
Hello there! Happy Wednesday! I do agree that young people have a lot of difficulties to face. These challenges are part of our lives. We cannot run
away from them so we are left to face them and overcome these troubles. I hope that you are fighting your own way to find your destiny.
-Teacher Grace- ^^
Young people have many problems.>>Correct.when they are graduate the high-school, they worry about that they aer going to high-class university.
>>When they graduate from high school, they worry about how they can get into a high-class university.
but, High-class universities have a limited in total admission people.
>>But high-class universities have limited numbers of students to be admitted.
so, we gonna do study extremely. >>So we have to study really hard.but this is not end of worry.
>>Our worries do not end here.
OR>>This is not the end of our dilemmas.after graduate the university, they will worry about get a job.
>>After graduating from the university, we will worry about how to get a job.but Good job which is a high rewards are limited to get in. >>But jobs with high rewards are limited and hard to get into.after get a job, they will worry about I should get marry with someone.
>>After we get a job, we will worry about getting married.
but, I don\'t know marry who.
>>But I don\'t know whom to marry.
It\'s difficult problem to me.
>>This will be a difficult problem for me.
but this is not end of young peoples worry. >>But this is not the end of young people\'s worries.also, you who is read this sentence are also worry about this problems.
>>Also, you, who is reading these sentences, is also worried. Humans life is not easy.
>>Human life is not easy.
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