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2025-08-13 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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ㅛImagine you’re a high school student at a new school where beauty standards are very important. Many students follow the same fashion, makeup, and style trends. Some classmates have suggested you change your style to fit in, like wearing specific brands or using makeup a certain way. While you want to make friends and feel accepted, you’re proud of your unique style and you also believe that beauty comes in different forms. How would you balance fitting in with staying true to yourself? Even your friends are just me the style that I should follow wearing a clothes that I want to and doing make up on my way is my choice so fitting in style cannot be mandatory but if you want to mix up the style you’re following then you can try makeup in your normal way, but using specific cosmetic brands product or wearing some style, but rematch with your style then that would make a perfect balance of your own style and trend.

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Thank you for this [이름]! Have a great evening.

Even your friends are just me the style that I should follow wearing a clothes that I want to and doing make up on my way is my choice so fitting in style cannot be mandatory
>>> Even my friends suggest the style I should follow, but wearing the clothes I want to and doing my makeup my way is my choice.  Fitting in with a certain style should not be mandatory. 
 but if you want to mix up the style you’re following then you can try makeup in your normal way, but using specific cosmetic brands product or wearing some style, 
>>> However, if you want to mix your style with current trends, you could try doing your makeup in your usual way but using specific cosmetic brands or wearing trendy items that still match your personal style.  
but rematch with your style then that would make a perfect balance of your own style and trend.
>>>  That way, you can create the perfect balance between your own style and the trend.

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