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2010-11-26 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Hi. Jane. There is a bad news. Remember the CD that you lent me last week. Unfortunately I broke it. I was taking it out of CD player. and the CD gor struck. When I tried to force it out. It broke into 2 pieces. I feel really sorry. and What do you want me to do? I will buy you new one. Will it be OK for you?

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], No further corrections noticed, like the usual case, you are still very good! I hope you will have a good weekend and you take care always Talk to you again later my dear okie? T.cam Hi. Jane. >>>Hi Jane,There is a bad news. >>correct! >>>There's a bad news. >>>I have a bad newsRemember the CD that you lent me last week. >>>Remember the CD that you lend me last week? >>>Remember the Cd that you sent me last week?Unfortunately I broke it. >>>Correct!I was taking it out of CD player. >>>Correct!and the CD gor struck. >>>>Then the Cd got stuck.When I tried to force it out. >>>Correct!It broke into 2 pieces. >>>Correct!I feel really sorry. >>> correct >>> I am really sorry. and What do you want me to do? >>>What can i do about it?I will buy you new one. Will it be OK for you? >>>I will just buy you a new one.

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