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학생이 쓴 원문
Hi. Jane.
There is a bad news.
Remember the CD that you lent me last week.
Unfortunately I broke it.
I was taking it out of CD player.
and the CD gor struck.
When I tried to force it out.
It broke into 2 pieces.
I feel really sorry. and What do you want me to do?
I will buy you new one. Will it be OK for you?
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
No further corrections noticed, like the usual case, you are still very good!
I hope you will have a good weekend and you take care always
Talk to you again later my dear okie?
T.cam
Hi. Jane.
>>>Hi Jane,There is a bad news.
>>correct!
>>>There's a bad news.
>>>I have a bad newsRemember the CD that you lent me last week.
>>>Remember the CD that you lend me last week?
>>>Remember the Cd that you sent me last week?Unfortunately I broke it.
>>>Correct!I was taking it out of CD player.
>>>Correct!and the CD gor struck.
>>>>Then the Cd got stuck.When I tried to force it out.
>>>Correct!It broke into 2 pieces.
>>>Correct!I feel really sorry.
>>> correct
>>> I am really sorry.
and What do you want me to do?
>>>What can i do about it?I will buy you new one. Will it be OK for you?
>>>I will just buy you a new one.
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