procedual

Hi, [이름]!

Wow! Congratulations!

I hope the doctors in the hospital will be your clients soon.

You are a good employee since you do your job well.

Thank you for sharing about this. Have a nice day!

_Teacher Dianne

Today morning, I had a pacemaker procedure using our product in st.mary seoul hospital. 

>>  Today morning, I had a pacemaker procedure using our product in St. Mary Seoul hospital. (Capitalize proper nouns)

>> or: I had a pacemaker procedure using our product in St. Mary Seoul hospital this morning. 

So I visited the hopital to give a technical support to a doctor who is cadiologist with equipment during the procedure first, the doctor implanted our pacemaker under patient\'s skin to help manage irregular heart beats called arrythmia.

>> So I visited the hospital to give a technical support to a doctor who is a cardiologist with equipment during the procedure. First, the doctor implanted our pacemaker under the patient\'s skin to help manage irregular heart beats called arrhythmia.

second, after that, I checked the device with the equipment if it works well or not . 

>> After that, I checked the device with the equipment if it works well or not.
 Finally, All the functions of the device we checked were so good and then the procedure ended successfully 

>> Finally, all the functions of the device we checked were so good and then the procedure ended successfully.

 1. The painter is awful. He paints (awfully).

>> correct
 2. Jim is a wonderful piano player. He plays the piano (wonderfully).

>> correct
 3. This girl is very quiet. She often sneaks out of the house (quietly).

>> correct
 4. She is a good dancer. She dances really (great)

>> She is a good dancer. She dances really well.
 5. This exercise is simple.

>> This exercise is simple. You simply have to put one word in each space.