prodigy
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My favorite(?) prodigy is King Sejong. He is born-to-be genius. The reason I like him is because he created Hangeul. THis accomplishment is not done at his teen age but...He is prodigy !
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Hi, [이름]!
I love that you chose King Sejong as your favorite prodigy! Your excitement really comes through in your writing. Next time, you could add a little more about why creating Hangeul was so important — it will make your answer even more impressive. Keep sharing your enthusiasm!
~Teacher Polly
>>CORRECT
He is born-to-be genius.
>>He was born to be a genius.
The reason I like him is because he created Hangeul.
>>The reason I like him is that he created Hangeul.
THis accomplishment is not done at his teen age but...He is prodigy !
>>This accomplishment was not done when he was a teenager, but he is truly a prodigy!
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