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2020-10-19 · 첨삭 강사 Jasper

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I usually get up early in the morning. So I do a lot of work in the morning regardless of my mood. I don`t want to do what I have to do in the morning. If I don`t do what I have to do, I don`t want to do it anymore in the afternoon. As I got older, my lifestyle changed. When I was young, I had a hard time waking up early in the morning. Now it is easy to get up. It`s nice to be able to use the morning hours. But I feel sleepy early. I wish I could use night time.

강사 첨삭

Happy Monday Mrs. [Name]! Thank you for doing your homework again. I appreciate it very much. You did a wonderful job. You only had a few mistakes. You\'re really improving a lot Mrs. [Name]. Keep up the good work. Have a great day! See you in class! -T. Jasper

Here are your corrections:

I usually get up early in the morning.
>> CORRECT

So I do a lot of work in the morning regardless of my mood.
>> CORRECT

I don`t want to do what I have to do in the morning.
>> CORRECT

If I don`t do what I have to do, I don`t want to do it anymore in the afternoon.
>> If I don`t do what I have to do, I wouldn\'t want to do it anymore in the afternoon.

As I got older, my lifestyle changed.
>> CORRECT

When I was young, I had a hard time waking up early in the morning.
>> CORRECT

Now it is easy to get up.
>> CORRECT

It`s nice to be able to use the morning hours.
>> CORRECT

But I feel sleepy early.
>> But I feel sleepy in the morning.
I wish I could use night time.
>> I wish I could use the night time to do all these things.

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