promise with you.

2010-02-25 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

학생이 쓴 원문

Hellow, my teacher I did promise of you that I will show you the my picture. So, I upload some picture in my blog. have a good day! http://blog.naver.com/PostView.nhn?blogId=nahz&logNo=[휴대전화] -- and I hope to speak that "Work Slaver" It's not a flaver ^.^

강사 첨삭

Hi Min,   I'm so happy to see your picture you look awesome  and adorable. Thank you for sending it to us.  You have to keep another promise too, you HAVE TO SING HAHAH. T. Connie Hellow, my teacher >> Hello, my teacherI did promise of you that I will show you the my picture. >> I promised you that I will show you my picture.So, I upload some picture in my blog. >> So, I uploaded some pictures in my blog.have a good day! http://blog.naver.com/PostView.nhn?blogId=nahz&logNo=[휴대전화]   and I hope to speak that "Work Slaver" It's not a flaver ^.^ >> What I mean to say is "Slave not flaver".

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