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Dear thankful teacher Kristel!
I am really sorry but could you please proofread these sentences below for me?
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In this paper, we propose an efficient Two-Factor Authentication method as the first step of differentiated technology on how to authenticate with the robot for natural communication between human and robot.
This paper describes the concept and types of the current domestic authentication technologies and suggests a strong authentication technology for Human Robot Interaction. The core elements of the authentication technology are Two-Factor authentication, strong user authentication method using GPS information, and non-repudiation feature.
Robots are becoming sophisticated and they are performing a lot of work instead of human.
Unlike the Robotic technologies from the past, Robots are holding greater performance like that of Human and it is also true that riskier security threat comes along if robot performs each work instead of human. As the role of robots are increasing, Human-robot interaction research is in a prime position[16][17] and security methods are becoming more important issue between human and robot.
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Hello there!!! ^^
Here you go! I hope it could be a grea help.
Have a great evening ahead!
And enjoy your vacation! ^^
Teacher Kristel ^_^
Dear thankful teacher Kristel!>> CORRECT!
>> OR: Dear teacher Kristel!I am really sorry but could you please proofread these sentences below for me?>> CORRECT!In this paper, we propose an efficient Two-Factor Authentication method as the first step of differentiated technology on how to authenticate with the robot for natural communication between human and robot.
>> In this paper, we propose an efficient Two-Factor Authentication method. The first step differentiates technology on how to authenticate with the robot for natural communication between human and robot.This paper describes the concept and types of the current domestic authentication technologies and suggests a strong authentication technology for Human Robot Interaction.
>> CORRECT!
The core elements of the authentication technology are Two-Factor authentication, strong user authentication method using GPS information, and non-repudiation feature.
>> The core elements of the authentication technology have two factors. First, strong user authentication method using GPS information. Another is non-repudiation feature.
Robots are becoming sophisticated and they are performing a lot of work instead of human.
>> Robots are becoming sophisticated and they are performing a lot of work than humans could.Unlike the Robotic technologies from the past, Robots are holding greater performance like that of Human and it is also true that riskier security threat comes along if robot performs each work instead of human.
>> CORRECT!
As the role of robots are increasing, Human-robot interaction research is in a prime position[16][17] and security methods are becoming more important issue between human and robot.
>> CORRECT!
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