propaganda
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The South and the North government are doing very consumed and wasteful political propaganda still.
I agree this decision removing loudspeakers in border.
Of course it is difficult to communicate negotiate with the North government in an authoritarian system .
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]!
I agree with you, and I hope that they won\'t put it back.
Thank you for this!
Aki~
The South and the North government are doing very consumed and wasteful political propaganda still.
>>> The South and the North Korean governments are still doing very consuming and wasteful political propaganda.
I agree this decision removing loudspeakers in border.
>>> I agree with this decision to remove loudspeakers at the border.
Of course it is difficult to communicate negotiate with the North government in an authoritarian system.
>>> Of course, it is difficult to communicate and negotiate with the North Korean government in an authoritarian system.
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