Propose a solution(TOEIC Speaking)
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there Pretty [이름]!
I said this because your voice always sound beautiful. :) I am sure that you are. :) :)
Thank you for such zealousness for our class. :)
And thank you for sending this composition.
I like the way how you solve the problems given. It\'s clear and simple. Its great. ^^
Check the corrections I gave below and again, have a great weekend.
See you.
Teacher Rowena
* PART 5 ( PROPOSE A SOLUTION ) QUESTION 1
▶ Hello, Ron. This is [이름] from ABC restaurant.
>>CORRECT!
I got your message concerning the jacket you lost in my restaurant.
>>CORRECT!
As soon as I got your message, I checked the seat you had sat, and I was looking for your jacket.
>>As soon as I got your message, I checked the seat you had sat, and looked for your jacket.
Fortunately, your jacket was right there you mentioned.
>>CORRECT!
You can take your jacket on the count in the restaurant.
>>DO YOU MEAN: You can take your jacket at the count in the restaurant.
OR: >> You can take your jacket at the count of the restaurant.
I’m happy that I found your jacket.
>>CORRECT!
Take care and have a good day.
>>CORRECT!
* PART 5 ( PROPOSE A SOLUTION ) QUESTION 2
▶ Hello, Nancy.
>>CORRECT!
This is [이름] from ABC taxi company.
>>CORRECT!
I’ve got your message that you lost your passport in one of our taxis.
>>CORRECT!
As soon as I got your message, I checked the license number and I found he is Sam.
>>BETTER: As soon as I got your message, I immediately checked the license number and found out that it is Sam.
I called him and asked him to look for a passport in his taxi.
>>CORRECT!
OR: >> I called and asked him to check if there is a passport left in his taxi.
Luckly, Sam found your passport and he is driving there.
>>Luckily, Sam found your passport and he is now on his way there.
He will call you at the terminal, so don’t worry about it.
>>CORRECT!
Thank you for using our taxi.
>>CORRECT!
Have a good trip. Bye~
>>CORRECT!
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