Propose a solution(TOEIC Speaking)

2014-03-22 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: * PART 5 ( PROPOSE A SOLUTION ) QUESTION 1 ▶ Hello, Ron. This is [이름] from ABC restaurant. I got your message concerning the jacket you lost in my restaurant. As soon as I got your message, I checked the seat you had sat, and I was looking for your jacket. Fortunately, your jacket was right there you mentioned. You can take your jacket on the count in the restaurant. I’m happy that I found your jacket. Take care and have a good day. * PART 5 ( PROPOSE A SOLUTION ) QUESTION 2 ▶ Hello, Nancy. This is [이름] from ABC taxi company. I’ve got your message that you lost your passport in one of our taxis. As soon as I got your message, I checked the license number and I found he is Sam. I called him and asked him to look for a passport in his taxi. Luckly, Sam found your passport and he is driving there. He will call you at the terminal, so don’t worry about it. Thank you for using our taxi. Have a good trip. Bye~

강사 첨삭

Hello there Pretty [이름]!

I said this because your voice always sound beautiful. :) I am sure that you are. :) :)

Thank you for such zealousness for our class. :)

And thank you for sending this composition.

I like the way how you solve the problems given. It\'s clear and simple. Its great. ^^

 Check the corrections I gave below and again, have a great weekend.

See you.

Teacher Rowena


* PART 5 ( PROPOSE A SOLUTION ) QUESTION 1


▶ Hello, Ron. This is [이름] from ABC restaurant.

>>CORRECT!

I got your message concerning the jacket you lost in my restaurant.

>>CORRECT!

As soon as I got your message, I checked the seat you had sat, and I was looking for your jacket.

>>As soon as I got your message, I checked the seat you had sat, and looked for your jacket.

Fortunately, your jacket was right there you mentioned.

>>CORRECT!

You can take your jacket on the count in the restaurant.

>>DO YOU MEAN: You can take your jacket at the count in the restaurant.

OR: >> You can take your jacket at the count of the restaurant.

I’m happy that I found your jacket.

>>CORRECT!

Take care and have a good day.
>>CORRECT!
* PART 5 ( PROPOSE A SOLUTION ) QUESTION 2


▶ Hello, Nancy.

>>CORRECT!

This is [이름] from ABC taxi company.

>>CORRECT!

I’ve got your message that you lost your passport in one of our taxis.

>>CORRECT!

As soon as I got your message, I checked the license number and I found he is Sam.

>>BETTER:  As soon as I got your message, I immediately checked the license number and found out that it is Sam.

I called him and asked him to look for a passport in his taxi.

>>CORRECT!

OR: >> I called and asked him to check if there is a passport left in his taxi.

Luckly, Sam found your passport and he is driving there.

>>Luckily, Sam found your passport and he is now on his way there.

He will call you at the terminal, so don’t worry about it.

>>CORRECT!

Thank you for using our taxi.

>>CORRECT!

Have a good trip. Bye~

>>CORRECT!

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