Pros and cons of me.

2011-07-05 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Yes everyone has strengths and weaknesses. My advantage is to speak English well compared to my coworkers. and I also can speech without getting nervous in front of many people. And I am good at meeting new people. These are my advantages. My weakness is that I still don't have a dream. I haven't decided what to do in the future. I want to make it ASAP and I don't like cleaning my room. So my room is always like Amazon jungle. And I also have many weaknesses that I haven't told you. But let's keep it secret.

강사 첨삭

Hello my dear [이름], Its nice to know that you have many strengths most specially in speaking English, I commend you for that. Its also nice that you acknowledge your weaknesses, and hoping that you could do something about that,kkk.. Anyway, job well done my dear and talk to you again later..:) -T. Cam-   Yes everyone has strengths and weaknesses. >>correct! My advantage is to speak English well compared to my coworkers. >>correct! and I also can speech without getting nervous in front of many people. >>And I can also speak without getting nervous in front of many people. >>I can also speak without having stage fright. And I am good at meeting new people. These are my advantages. >>correct! My weakness is that I still don't have a dream. >>correct! I haven't decided what to do in the future. >>I havent decided yet what to do in the future. I want to make it ASAP >>I want to decide as soon as possible. and I don't like cleaning my room. >>I dont like cleaning my room as well. So my room is always like Amazon jungle. >>So my room seems to be  the Amazon Forest. And I also have many weaknesses that I haven't told you. >>correct! But let's keep it secret. >>But lets just keep them as a secret.

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