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The results of this study are amazing.
I am very interested in the result of these medical studies, because I am middlepaged, menopause and took cancer surjury.
I try to eat dairy protein everyday. Especially I am making homemade yogart almost everyday.
Also I eat chicken breasts regularly for mainteining muscles.
Fortunately I don\'t suffer from the symton of hormonal changes of the menopause such as face fever, insonia and depression .
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Hello there Ms. [이름]!
Indeed is was a very interesting study. People have a misconception of eating dairy products. Same here. I thought that diary products wuld meake us more fat then I read an article that high protein helps you lose weight. Well it is not all about losing weight isn\'t it but being healthy.
Thank you for your time :)
Aki~
The results of this study are amazing.
>> Correct!
I am very interested in the result of these medical studies, because I am middlepaged, menopause and took cancer surjury.
>>> I am very interested in the result of these medical studies, because I am middle-aged, menopause, and had a cancer surgery.
I try to eat dairy protein everyday. Especially I am making homemade yogart almost everyday.
>>> I try to eat dairy protein every day, I am especially making homemade yogurt almost every day.
Also I eat chicken breasts regularly for mainteining muscles.
>>> I also eat chicken breasts regularly for maintaining muscles.
Fortunately I don\'t suffer from the symton of hormonal changes of the menopause such as face fever, insonia and depression
>>> Fortunately, I don\'t suffer from the symptoms of hormonal changes of the menopause such as face fever, insomnia and depression
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