Protecting animal=protecting environment
학생이 쓴 원문
Protecting animals means protecting environment. If we protect environment, animals can live better. I\'ll cite three ways how to protect environment.
First, we must not throw away trash to the environment. It can protect environment from pollution.
Second, we should not drive car too much. Driving car too much can cause air pollution.
Third, we should grow lots of trees. Trees can take in harmful air.
Frankly, there are a lot of ways to protect environment(animals). But these three ways are very important things to protect environment, so we should follow these at least.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Daniel! Your work is
comprehensible and well-structured. Please don\'t forget to put the article THE before the word ENVIRONMENT though.
- Teacher Debbie
>> Protecting animals means protecting the environment.
If we protect environment, animals can live better.
>> If we protect the environment, animals can live better.
I\'ll cite three ways how to protect environment.
>> I\'ll cite three ways how to protect the environment.
First, we must not throw away trash to the environment.
>> First, we must not throw away trash anywhere.
It can protect environment from pollution.
>> It can protect the environment from pollution.
Second, we should not drive car too much.
>> Second, we should not drive cars too much.
Driving car too much can cause air pollution.
>> Driving cars too much can cause air pollution.
Third, we should grow lots of trees.
>> This is a good sentence.
Trees can take in harmful air.
>> This is a good sentence.
Frankly, there are a lot of ways to protect environment(animals).
>> Frankly, there are a lot of ways to protect the environment and the animals.
But these three ways are very important things to protect environment, so we should follow these at least.
>> However, these three ways are the most important to protect the environment, so we should follow them at least.
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