Protest with technology
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that protests will take place anytime,anywhere immediately with the help of technology,especially Internet. And with continuous reporting and feedback, protesters can gather new participants and last their demonstrations. They can also attract many people\'s attention and support from other countries.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Gi [이름]!
I totally agree! Technology can help disseminate information easily and make it more accessible not only to people in nearby areas but also in other places, or even other countries. Sometimes, I also think that social media can influence how people react. For instance, seeing a lot of people protesting might encourage others to do the same, or it can also influence their political views.
- T. Caitlyn
I think that protests will take place anytime,anywhere immediately with the help of technology,especially Internet.
>> I think that protests can take place anytime, anywhere, immediately with the help of technology, especially the Internet.
And with continuous reporting and feedback, protesters can gather new participants and last their demonstrations.
>> With continuous reporting and feedback, protesters can gather new participants and sustain their demonstrations.
They can also attract many people\'s attention and support from other countries.
>> CORRECT
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