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2020-10-16 · 첨삭 강사 Jasper

학생이 쓴 원문

I want to do everything for the person I love. I realized how strong the power of love is with the children. I do a lot of things at home and at work. But when I do it to them I get to feel happy. Sometimes I become a cook, a counselor, a friend to my sons, As I became a mother, I had been changed a superwoman.

강사 첨삭

Hello Mrs. [Name], thank you for diligently making your homework. Keep up the good work. You are doing great. See on our next class. Have a wonderful weekend. -T. Jasper

Here are your corrections:

I want to do everything for the person I love.

>> CORRECT

I realized how strong the power of love is with the children.

>> CORRECT

I do a lot of things at home and at work.

>> CORRECT

But when I do it to them I get to feel happy.

>> But when I do it to them, I feel happier.

Sometimes I become a cook, a counselor, a friend to my sons,

>> Sometimes I become a cook, a counselor, and a friend to my sons,

As I became a mother, I had been changed a superwoman.

>> As I became a mother, I also became a superwoman.

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