Providing students with grades promotes learning
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Some people say that providing students with grades could discourage them and stopping them from learning. But, in my opinion, providing students with grades could promote learning because it can stimulate their passion and diagnose the state of oneself.
To begin with, providing grades can stimulate their passion to study more harder. Visual result is one of the best stimulator to make someone do more harder. It will act like a fuel to car. In my case, i can study toeic more harder by watching the result of it, Finally, i can accomplish my goal of toeic score.
On top of that, it can also diagnose the level of oneself. It is true that the more you know about yourself, the better you can grow. Also, you can study effectively by analysis your study skill. According to a study by education department of government, students who know the level of themselves are better in national colleage entrance exam than those who don\'t know their state.
To sum up, i agree with this content.
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Providing students with grades promotes learning
Some people say that providing students with grades could discourage them and stopping them from learning.
>>> CORRECT
But, in my opinion, providing students with grades could promote learning because it can stimulate their passion and diagnose the state of oneself.
>>> CORRECT
To begin with, providing grades can stimulate their passion to study more harder.
To begin with, providing grades can stimulate their passion to study more harder.
>>> To begin with, providing grades can stimulate their passion to study harder.
Visual result is one of the best stimulator to make someone do more harder.
>>> The visual result is one of the best simulators to make someone do harder or better.
It will act like a fuel to car. In my case, i can study toeic more harder by watching the result of it, Finally, i can accomplish my goal of toeic score.
>>> It will act as fuel to a car. In my case, I can study TOEIC harder by watching the result of it, Finally, I can accomplish my goal of aiming a higher TOEIC score.
On top of that, it can also diagnose the level of oneself.
>>> CORRECT
It is true that the more you know about yourself, the better you can grow.
>>> CORRECT
Also, you can study effectively by analysis your study skill.
>>> Also, you can study effectively by analyzing your studying skills.
According to a study by education department of government, students who know the level of themselves are better in national colleage entrance exam than those who don\'t know their state.
>>> According to a study by the education department of the government, students who know the level of themselves are better in the National College entrance exam than those who don\'t know their state.
To sum up, i agree with this content.
>>> To sum up, I agree with this content.
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