Public transportation
학생이 쓴 원문
I would have to say that my favorite public transportation is bus. I mean, I really like to take buses. They are truly convenient especially in my country, south korea. I can go everywhere I want to visit without that much try. Moreover, it is much cheaper than taking taxies or other transportation. I am truly satisfied in taking buses cuz I can also arrive my destination with watching outside\'s scenery. It is so stunning if I take bus when sun is rising or falling. I really love it. Those are why i like buses the most. Thanks!
강사 첨삭
Hi, Gilbert!
It’s nice to know that you enjoy riding buses and find it entertaining as well. I also feel the same way when I take the bus to other provinces in my country. I get to do some sightseeing while on the bus and enjoy it while listening to music on my headset.
- T. Caitlyn
I would have to say that my favorite public transportation is bus.
>> I would have to say that my favorite form of public transportation is the bus.
I mean, I really like to take buses.
>> CORRECT
They are truly convenient, especially in my country, South Korea.
>> CORRECT
I can go everywhere I want to visit without that much try.
>> I can go everywhere I want to visit without much effort.
Moreover, it is much cheaper than taking taxies or other transportation.
>> Moreover, it is much cheaper than taking taxis or other forms of transportation.
I am truly satisfied in taking buses cuz I can also arrive my destination with watching outside\'s scenery.
>> I am truly satisfied with taking buses because I can also reach my destination while enjoying the scenery outside.
It is so stunning if I take bus when sun is rising or falling.
>> It is so stunning when I take the bus as the sun is rising or setting.
I really love it.
>> CORRECT
Those are why i like buses the most.
>> These are the reasons why I like buses the most.
Thanks!
>> CORRECT
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