Public Transportation

2018-05-17 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

There are a few typical public transportation in Korea like subway, bus and taxi. If I go to Seoul, I always take a subway. Because The subway is very convinence and I can arrive at meeting place on time.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Daniel! ^^,)

A happy Thursday to you!

Thank you so much for this composition.

I have made some modifications though. I will talk to you again tomorrow.

See you then!

_T. Mayleen :)


There are a few typical public transportation in Korea like subway, bus and taxi.
>>> There are a few typical modes of public transportation in Korea like subway, bus, and taxi.
If I go to Seoul, I always take a subway.
>>> I always take the subway to go to Seoul.
Because The subway is very convinence and I can arrive at meeting place on time.

>>> It\'s because taking the subway is very convenient and you can arrive at the meeting place on time. 

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