Public transportation of my city

2024-03-04 · 첨삭 강사 Khai

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In my city, the elderly population is larger than the youth populations, and the elderly populations is decreasing. So, the exclusive bus company in our city-there is only one bus company in our city- has reduced bus routes a lot. The people who have drive license don\'t feel uncomfortable, but the eldery who don\'t have licence get a problem to go out to urban. So, our city goverment give coupons to take a taxi to the eldery who live far away from the city. The people having this coupons can call for a taxi, and they can go out to urban.

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You have shared how the government helps people travel and use public transportation. Good job, [이름]! ^^

-Khai

In my city, the elderly population is larger than the youth populations, and the elderly populations is decreasing.

>> In my city, the elderly population is larger than the youth population. The elderly population is decreasing.
So, the exclusive bus company in our city-there is only one bus company in our city- has reduced bus routes a lot.

>> So, there is only one bus company in our city, and it has reduced a lot of bus routes.
The people who have drive license don\'t feel uncomfortable, but the eldery who don\'t have licence get a problem to go out to urban.

>> The people who have a driver\'s license don\'t feel uncomfortable, but the elderly who don\'t have a license have a problem going out into the city.

So, our city goverment give coupons to take a taxi to the eldery who live far away from the city.

>> So, our city government gives coupons to take a taxi to the elderly who live far away from the city.
The people having this coupons can call for a taxi, and they can go out to urban.

>> People with these coupons can call for a taxi, and they can go out to the city.

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