Pull out my teeth

2017-01-24 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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After math complement class,I saw a dentist to Pull out my teeth.My two tooth is shakig and it makes me angry chewing some foods.The nurse gave a medicne and the dentist pull out my teeth.Then mom and I ran to home to have a English Class.I didn't eat anyting and after class I eat ramen.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


You didn\'t tell about this earlier.

Well, I hope you\'re doing fine now.

Now I understand why you felt bad.

Take care and I hope you can eat well. ^^


_Teacher Dianne ^^


After math complement class,I saw a dentist to Pull out my teeth.

>> I saw a dentist to pull out my teeth after my Math complement class.


My two tooth is shakig and it makes me angry chewing some foods.

>> Two of my teeth were shaking and it\'s making me angry to chew some foods.

>> or: Two of my teeth were shaking and this was annoying to chew some foods.


The nurse gave a medicne and the dentist pull out my teeth.

>> The nurse gave a medicine to me and then the dentist pulled out my teeth.


Then mom and I ran to home to have a English Class.I didn\'t eat anyting and after class I eat ramen.

>> Then my mom and I ran home to have my English class with you. I didn\'t eat anything before the class then I ate ramen after our class.

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