Pull-up bar
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I bought a pull-up bar last Monday. I want to exercise and have a muscle.I think if I have a muscle I can get a more confidence. My friend said when I do this exercise I can't grow up.But I think doing exercise is too exciting.
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I bought a pull-up bar last Monday.
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I want to exercise and have a muscle.I think if I have a muscle I can get a more confidence. My friend said when I do this exercise I can\'t grow up.But I think doing exercise is too exciting.
>> I want to exercise and have muscles. I think I will be more confident if I have muscles. My friend said that when I do this exercise I won\'t grow up. But I think doing exercise is exciting.
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