punish
학생이 쓴 원문
This situation is very harmful to the criminal, at the end like a loophole law system will make him a serious criminal.
His behavior is not simple mistake or fault that juveniles do easily to do.
He mocks and exploits the law and social rule the name of juvenile under the age of criminal responsibility.
The law should be modified to protect good people.
And he and his parents should be punished .
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ms. [이름]!
The society must stop normalizing settlement as a way to solve juvenile crime. It gives them more confident reasons that they won\'t be punished since the \"parents\" will be handling the case they were involved in. I agree on lowering the age of accountability for teenagers who commit a crime because these teenagers are abusing the law.
See you in class!
Aki~
This situation is very harmful to the criminal, at the end like a loophole law system will make him a serious criminal.
>>> This situation is very harmful to the criminal, in the end, like a loophole in the law system will make him a serious criminal.
His behavior is not simple mistake or fault that juveniles do easily to do.
>>> His behavior is not a simple mistake or fault that juveniles commit easily.
He mocks and exploits the law and social rule the name of juvenile under the age of criminal responsibility.
>>> He mocks and exploits the law and social rule, the name of a juvenile under the age of criminal responsibility.
The law should be modified to protect good people.
>>> CORRECT!
And he and his parents should be punished.
>>> CORRECT!
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