punishment
학생이 쓴 원문
Since the death penalty was removed the strongest is life imprisonment.
I don`t understand why the death penalty is gone.
A few years ago, a close relative was stabbed to death.
He had a wife and two young children.
It`s really terrible for this family and they have to live without their dad and husband for the rest of life.
The murderer was sentenced to only ten years in prison.
The victim`s wounds can`t be cured the law seems to be the side of the perpetrator.
강사 첨삭
Hi Mrs. [Name]. As always, you did great in your homework. Keep it up and thank you for doing your homework. It is much appreciated. I\'m also sorry to what happened to your close relative. -T. Jasper
Here are your corrections:
Since the death penalty was removed the strongest is life imprisonment.
>> Since the death penalty had been removed, the worst punishment is life imprisonment.
>> CORRECT
>> A few years ago, a close relative of [이름]e was stabbed to death.
>> CORRECT
>> It\'s a terrible experience for this family because they have to live without a father and a husband for the rest of their lives.
>> The murderer was sentenced with only 10 years imprisonment.
>> The victims\' wounds can\'t be cured by the law and it seems like they are on the side of the perpetrator.
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