Purifier 2( rest of purifier) // journal of the day of 7.24
학생이 쓴 원문
1) I (was) in Canberra last spring.
2) We (were) at school last Saturday.
3) Tina (was) at home yesterday.
4) He (was) happy.
5) Robert and Stan (were) Garry's friends.
6) You (were) very busy on Friday.
7) They (were) in front of the supermarket.
8) I (was) in the museum.
9) She (was) in South Africa last month.
10) Jessica and Kimberly (were) late for school.
I also have purifier in my house. but it doesn't work because we didn't care of it as well as we didn't applied to caring service.
I don't know the reason why we don't use it even we have the machine.
Maybe someday, my mother would give it to me. You know that I'm good at cleaning so I clean the machine and I will use it!
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I came here for education as a student. but the manager of dormitory gave all of students of this course nightduty to stay awake. So I had to be awake from 02:00
to 03:00. It is horrible thing. I didn't know why he ordered this I couldn't understand. To make matter worse,,,,,
강사 첨삭
[이름],
Hello again! Wow! Wonderful job again!
Your grammar homework are really impressive!
Keep it up! I hope that you will have a great time learning.
I\'m sorry to hear about that, maybe he wants the students to study more.
Think positive. I know that it will be really helpful for you.
Good night.Teacher Nina
1) I (was) in Canberra last spring.
>> Correct! 2) We (were) at school last Saturday.
>> Correct! 3) Tina (was) at home yesterday.
>> Correct! 4) He (was) happy.
>> Correct! 5) Robert and Stan (were) Garry\'s friends.
>> Correct! 6) You (were) very busy on Friday.
>> Correct! ( Oh! It should be last Friday. ^^ ) 7) They (were) in front of the supermarket.
>> Correct! 8) I (was) in the museum.
>> Correct! 9) She (was) in South Africa last month.
>> Correct! 10) Jessica and Kimberly (were) late for school.
>> Correct! I also have purifier in my house.
>> I also have a purifier at home.
but it doesn\'t work because we didn\'t care of it as well as we didn\'t applied to caring service.
>> But it doesn\'t work because we didn\'t take good care of it as well as we didn\'t bring it into a service center. I don\'t know the reason why we don\'t use it even we have the machine.
>> I don\'t know the reason why we don\'t use it even if we have a machine.
>> OR: I don\'t know the reason why we don\'t use it even if we have it. Maybe someday, my mother would give it to me.
>> Correct!
You know that I\'m good at cleaning so I clean the machine and I will use it!
>> You know that I\'m good at cleaning so I will clean it and use it. ////I came here for education as a student.
>> I came here for education and I am a student.
>> OR: I came here to learn and I am a student.
but the manager of dormitory gave all of students of this course nightduty to stay awake.
>> But the manager of the dormitory gave all of the students this course at night to stay awake.
So I had to be awake from 02:00 to 03:00.
>> Correct!
It is horrible thing.
>> Correct!
I didn\'t know why he ordered this I couldn\'t understand.
>> Correct!
To make matter worse,,,,,
>> Correct!
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