Putin is not a human

2022-05-18 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

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I bought cooking oil as usual yesterday. I was very surprised to see the jumped price tag. We suffer from inflation and anxiety about world peace. Putin is a symbol of evil.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Ms. [이름]!
I agree with you. What kind of management do you do in your house to avoid food waste since everything is becoming expensive?
Have a great and awesome day!
Aki~
I bought cooking oil as usual yesterday.
>>>> CORRECT
I was very surprised to see the jumped price tag.
>>>> CORRECT
OR >>> I was very surprise to see the leap on the price tag of most items.
We suffer from inflation and anxiety about world peace.
>>>> We are suffering from inflation and became more anxious about world peace.
Putin is a symbol of evil.
>>>> CORRECT

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