Pyeongchang Olympic
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Hi, [이름]!
I think you\'re really excited for the Winter Olympics.
Tell me about it soon.
Have a great day!
Enjoy your weekend as well.
_Teacher Dianne ^^
Pyeongchang Olympic is coming soon.
>> The Winter Olympics in Pyeongchang is coming soon.
>> or: The Winter Olympics in Pyeongchang is nearly approaching.
They will be match at Feburary.School will support going to Pyeongchang.But only I will go to Pyeongchang.
>> They will have a match in February and the school will support the representatives or players going to Pyeongchang, but I will only go there alone.
They will almost no chance to participate Olympic.So,I will go there and watch playing skating.
>> They almost don\'t have a chance to participate in the Winter Olympics, so, I will go there and watch the players of skating.
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