Q
학생이 쓴 원문
1. What kinds of websites do you often visit?
Video sharing website > favorite website youtube/ spend most of one\'s time using a computer> good for watching interesting video
2. What is your favorite website?
3. Are there any changes about the websites you often visit?
a lots of people become creator/ developed smart devices with camera> easy to become videomaker > many people upload theirs video
4. What kinds of websites are popular in you country?
Youtube / it is the only site in the all generations of my family’s phone> it is not just about us >
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Alice!
Your brainstormed ideas here below helped you a lot in expounding your answers in class. A job well done!
Enjoy your weekend, see you next week!
-T. Donna =)
Video sharing website > favorite website youtube/ spend most of one\'s time using a computer> good for watching interesting video
>> YouTube
2. What is your favorite website?
>> YouTube / various contents/ favorite YouTuber
3. Are there any changes about the websites you often visit?
a lots of people become creator/ developed smart devices with camera> easy to become videomaker > many people upload theirs video
3. Are there any changes about the websites you often visit?
a lots of people become creator/ developed smart devices with camera> easy to become videomaker > many people upload theirs video
>> many people upload theirs videos
4. What kinds of websites are popular in you country?
Youtube / it is the only site in the all generations of my family’s phone> it is not just about us >
4. What kinds of websites are popular in you country?
Youtube / it is the only site in the all generations of my family’s phone> it is not just about us >
>> YouTube
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