Q
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1. Are you interested in watching TV advertisements or internet advertisements?
2. What kinds of advertisements do you dislike?
3. Do you share advertisements with others?
4. Do you want to work in advertising in the future?
강사 첨삭
Good day, Alice!
I am grateful to see the questions for our discussion today. I have placed some suggestions and you may or may not use them depending on your preference. Our goal is for you to answer as adequately and meanigfully as you can. Thank you for sending them early and see you later!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
Or: skip/ no intesrest/ disrupt viewing experience
2. What kinds of advertisements do you dislike?
>> Correct!
Or: noisy/ very colorful
3. Do you share advertisements with others?
>> Correct!
Or: if the commercial is very interesting/ famous celebrity/ personality
4. Do you want to work in advertising in the future?
>> Correct!
Or: certainly/ to be part of the commercial/ model/ inlfuencer
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