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2022-06-08 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

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[13] Mirrors 1. Do you like looking at yourself in the mirror? How often? 2. Have you ever bought mirrors? 3. Do you usually take a mirror with you? 4. Would you use mirrors to decorate your room?

강사 첨삭

Hello there, Alice!

You woke up very early today to send me these questions, well done! I have given you two options whether to agree or disagree so make sure to think of specific answers that will support your choice.

Catch you soon!

-T. Donna =) 

1. Do you like looking at yourself in the mirror? How often?
>> Correct!
Or: Yes/I have to see details of my outfit and how I look like/ it\'s important for women to look good to feel good/ preparation means respect for others who will see me.

2. Have you ever bought mirrors?
>> No/We have a big one at home/ it is a basic home wall functional decor 
>> Yes/ make up mirrors come along together/ they are handy and useful/ you can bring them anywhere/ smartphone cameras are similar to this too 

3. Do you usually take a mirror with you?
>> Not anymore/ cellphone camera can be a mirror/ I don\'t carry a big bag/ 
>> Yes I do/ I still find it useful

4. Would you use mirrors to decorate your room?
>> No/ it\'s a distraction/ room is for sleeping/ place is somewhere outside the room
>> Yes/ I can check my self before going out/ I can stay prepared and look fine

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