Q
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Do you wear a watch?
2. Have you ever got a watch as a gift?
3. Why do some people wear expensive watches?
4. Do you think it is important to wear a watch? Why?
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Alice!
Here are some of the ways you can answer these questions. Decide on questions that make you choose and explain them thoroughly.
See you later in class!
See you later in class!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
Or: Yes/ it is useful not to bring out smartphone/ for fashion and convenience
Or: No/ smartphone has time/ a time piece is expensive/ inconvenient
2. Have you ever got a watch as a gift?
>> Correct!
Or: No/ I bought one before/ I never got one
Or: Yes/ it was a gold one (describe the watch)/ I still wear it today
>> Correct!
Or: It is a form of power/ it\'s an investment/ the watch lasts a lifetime
>> Correct!
Or: Nowadays, it is still relevant but not so important/ for fashion/ convenience/ to check the time quickly
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