Q
학생이 쓴 원문
- Old buildings
1. Have you ever seen some old buildings in the city?
2. Do you think we should preserve old buildings in cities?
3. Do you prefer living in an old building or a modern house?
4. Are there any old buildings you want to see in the future? Why?
강사 첨삭
Hello there again, Alice!
Today on your strong answers to these questions, I was able to take note of these information. So, study well how they were stated below and practice answering them again when you get some time.
Excellent job in class!
See you again tomorrow.
-T. Donna =)
1. Have you ever seen some old buildings in the city?
>> Correct!
Or: Yes/ I pass by them as I head on to my work/ they are during the colonial period/ they have a different structure from the modern ones.
2. Do you think we should preserve old buildings in cities?
2. Do you think we should preserve old buildings in cities?
>> Correct!
Or: Yes/ they need some restoration rather than building new ones/ preservation means that we care about our history/ other countries preserve their buildings/ they connect us to the past.
>> Correct!
Or: I prefer living in a modern house/ it is more comfortable and convenient/ it has amenities and technology that make life better/ there are no dusts and water dropping my the ceiling/ there are a few things to repair.
>> Correct!
Or: Yes, the Notre Dame church in France that burned/ it was restored/ it was the same as new but still old/ we had a similar experience in our country with an old building being burnt.
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