Q
학생이 쓴 원문
- Collecting things
1. Do you collect things?
2. Are there any things you keep from childhood?
3. Would you keep old things for a long time? Why?
4. Where do you usually keep things you need?
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Alice!
Here are a few suggestions I mafe. Go over them and make sure to give concrete examples on your answers. Thank you so much for sending them early!
See you then.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
Or: Yes/ Mention your collection and why do you collect them/ where do you keep them?/ Are they useful?
2. Are there any things you keep from childhood?
>> Correct!
3. Would you keep old things for a long time? Why?
Or: Yes/ State the thing and why you will have it/ Where do you keep them?/ Do you still use it?
>> Correct!
Or: Yes/ No/ Explain why by giving 2-3 reasons and give concrete details.
>> Correct!
Or: Near eye sight/ Tell where and why/ why do you choos to put them there.
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