Q
학생이 쓴 원문
Computers
1. In what conditions would you use a computer?
2. When was the first time you used a computer?
3. What would your life be like without computers?
4. In what conditions would it be difficult for you to use a computer?
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Alice, here are some of those you mentioned in class today.
Go over them, including Question #4 so that you can get a better picture of what the question means and what answers are possible to say.
Thank you and see you again tomorrow.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
Or: I use it in making essays/ Internet Zoom class/ for
2. When was the first time you used a computer?
2. When was the first time you used a computer?
>> Correct!
Or: 8 years old/ I use it to answer my teachers requirements
3. What would your life be like without computers?
>> Correct!
Or: I cannot watch repeat or new episodes of drama/ difficult to get information
4. In what conditions would it be difficult for you to use a computer?
>> Correct!
Or: No network connection/ No Internet.
***Regarding question #4 this is what it means:
1.) What are the situations when it is difficult to use a computer?
Or:
2.) When is using a computer hard.
So, this is looking for SITUATIONS and TIMES when using a computer is inconvenient or difficult.
Thus, we can say:
1.) When there is no Internet we cannot access information on our computer.
2.) When our hands are both busy holding some other things, we cannot operate the computer.
3.) When I do not know a computer application ( Adobe Creative Cloud, Paint 3D, Slack, etc.) it may be hard to use the computer.
4.) When you are in a place where silence is needed like in the movie or theater, you cannot open your computer/ lap top.
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