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학생이 쓴 원문
10/15, You asked me something; Why is it difficult to get a job in Korea?
Answer : I think it have some reasons. To say one thing, many companies want to use less money for employing workers. For example, three people have to do some work, but a company hire two people. Thus, two employees have to work more, and the other can’t have a job.
강사 첨삭
Hi Se [이름]!
Here are the corrections.
I think it have some reasons. To say one thing, many companies want to use less money for employing workers.
>>I think there are some reasons. To say one thing, many companies want to use less money for employing workers.
For example, three people have to do some work, but a company hire two people.
>>For example, three people have to do some work, but the company only hires two.
Thus, two employees have to work more, and the other can’t have a job.
>>Correct!
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