Q. Are we too dependent on computers?
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People might think we are not overly dependent on computers but we are.
We use computers a lot of times
When the computers or the internet go down, people freak out which shows we are entirely too dependent because we can\'t do anything without computers.
Computers are to be used in good way, but some people use them in wrong ways.
-Teacher Chloe
Yes, we are too dependent on computers.
>>Correct!
Can you imagine the world without computers?
>>Correct!
How can you give your presentation in the company?
>>How employees can have presentations to their bosses?
How do you submit your report in university?
>>How can you submit your reports in universities?
How do you sent mail in a few seconds to your friends?
>>How can you you send e-mails to your friends in a few seconds?
Thanks to computers even we don have to go to the library to search for information any more.
>>Thanks to computers because we don\'t need go to the library to search for information anymore.
Its no doubt that computers make our life easy and convenient.
>>Undoubtedly, computers make our lives easier and more convenient.
Thats why there are people who try to develop various functions of computers, and more people use them.
>>That is why people try to develop more functions of computers so that we can use them every time.
Because of this convenience, even though there are many side effects of using computers such as addition, hacking and the leaking of private information, people cant stop themselves from using computers.
>>Despite of the convenience, disadvantages also arise such as hacking and leaking of people\'s private information.
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