Q: If you could live in only one season forever, which would you choose?
학생이 쓴 원문
Q: If you could live in only one season forever, which would you choose?
A: I choose spring because spring is the season when the weather gets warmer. I really hate cold so I feel comfortable when winter passed and spring comes.
thanks to the weather of spring, I can enjoy outdoor hobbies such as golfing and camping.
and when spring is coming, all plants revives. then I can enjoy my another hobby, gardening.
강사 첨삭
Hi! Great job with your answer! I really like how you explained why spring is your favorite season, you gave clear reasons about the weather, outdoor hobbies, and even gardening. Your description shows a lot of personality and makes your answer very enjoyable to read. You expressed your ideas in a natural way, and I can feel your love for spring through your words. Keep sharing your thoughts like this, you’re doing amazing!
-Teacher Wela
I choose spring because spring is the season when the weather gets warmer.
>> I would choose spring because spring is the season when the weather gets warmer.
I really hate cold so I feel comfortable when winter passed and spring comes.
>> I really dislike the cold so I feel comfortable when winter passes and spring arrives.
thanks to the weather of spring, I can enjoy outdoor hobbies such as golfing and camping.
>>Thanks to the pleasant weather in spring, I can enjoy outdoor hobbies such as golfing and camping.
and when spring is coming, all plants revives.
>>Also, when spring comes, all the plants revive.
then I can enjoy my another hobby, gardening.
>> and I can enjoy another hobby of mine, which is gardening.
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