Q. Some employers want to be able to contact their staff at all times, even on holidays. Does this d

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Thank you for doing your composition. I appreciate it and you have a good point that employers should have limitations when asking their employees to work during their off. We all need a well-balanced life so we won\'t burn out.
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~T. Eunice

The most important thing in my life is keeping balance between work and life.
>> The most important thing in my life is to have a well-balanced life.
And it is a worldwide trend that people don’t blindly pursue to make money.
>> It is a worldwide trend that people don’t blindly pursue to make money.
But if employers are able to contact their staffs whenever they want, their life will be out of balance.
>> Correct
For example, when I worked at an event promotion company, If there was an events or a concert on weekend, staffs overworked on weekdays and even couldn’t be off on weekend.
>> For example, when I worked at an event promotion company, If there was an event or a concert on weekend the staffs used to overwork on weekdays and even they couldn’t be off on weekend.
So chat room was activated until late night every day.
>> So the chat room was activated every day until late night. 
So If boss contacted me to ask figuring out the problem, I had to solve them even during meeting my friends or taking a rest.
>> So If the boss contacted me to figure out the problem, I had to solve them even when I\'m with my friends or taking a rest.
I had always felt nervous and depressed all the times. but I couldn’t say anything. because every staffs took it granted overworking.
>> I had always felt nervous and depressed all the times but I couldn’t say anything because every staff took it for granted.
It made employees lower morale that run into bad effect in outcomes.
>> It made employees lower their morale and that runs into bad effect and outcome.
That’s why respecting proper work-life balance is very important to thrive their business.
>> That’s why respecting a proper balance at work is very important to thrive their business.