Q) Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence, while others think that inte

2019-09-06 · 첨삭 강사 May

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I think that success is not just the best measure for intelligence because there are many ways to measure it. For example, there is a comedian in my country and he always act like dumb. As a result, I thought he would not be intelligence. By the way, there is a news that he took part i intelligent program one day and I was disappointed that program\\\'s director because that was my favorite program. However, he had been doing his best and the results were good as well. Even he won the game and I was already absorbed into all his doing. After the winning, he takes a shoot the comedy program which he always have taken part in. I was also surprise of his doing after that winning. Nowadays his image is not only a comedian who works hard for viewers but also intelligent person everyone knows. Therefore, I believe that success is not the only way to measure for intelligence. /1.recall 2.went 3.couldn\'t sleep 4.ate 5.wasn\'t 6.understood 7.got 8.is thankful 9.had 10.were

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I think that success is not just the best measure for intelligence because there are many ways to measure it.

>> CORRECT

For example, there is a comedian in my country and he always act like dumb.

>> For example, there is a comedian in my country and he always acts like a dumb.

As a result, I thought he would not be intelligence.

>> I thought he was not intelligent.

By the way, there is a news that he took part i intelligent program one day and I was disappointed that program\\\'s director because that was my favorite program.

>> Then, I heard a news that he took part in an intelligence program and I got disappointed with the program\'s director because that was my favorite program.

However, he had been doing his best and the results were good as well.

>> CORRECT

Even he won the game and I was already absorbed into all his doing.

>> He even won the competition and I was already absorbed into all his doings.

After the winning, he takes a shoot the comedy program which he always have taken part in.

>> After the winning, he took a shoot from the comedy program which he always have taken part in.

I was also surprise of his doing after that winning.

>> I was also surprised of what he had done after the winning.

Nowadays his image is not only a comedian who works hard for viewers but also intelligent person everyone knows.

>> Now, he is known not only a comedian who works hard for the viewers but also an intelligent person that everyone knows.

Therefore, I believe that success is not the only way to measure for intelligence.

>> Therefore, I believe that success is not the only way to measure intelligence.
1.recall

>> DIDN\'T DISTURB

2.went

>> CORRECT

3.couldn\'t sleep

>> CORRECT

4.ate

>> DIDN\'T EAT

5.wasn\'t

>> CORRECT

6.understood

>> CORRECT

7.got

>> CAME

8 .is thankful

>> DIDN\'T COST

9.had

>> DIDN\'T HAVE

10.were

>> CORRECT

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